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Tori no Uta (ENG) Cover by WindSwirl Tori no Uta (ENG) Cover by WindSwirl


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OMGOMGOMG My own manga :squee:

Some of you have seen the storyboard at my sta.sh already, right? :D

... I've got lots of time most recently so I decided to make a manga.
I've been thinking about this for quite a while now, actually ... for years.
But I never had enough time to get on with it ... right now I do :dance:

I'll upload pages once a week from now on, so please be patient! :aww:
I consider this the first page so next one will be out next Friday ^^


EDIT: Like mangakas ever keep their deadlines, lol.

I forgot to say, I'm mainly using stocks by screentones in this manga. If you need some for your own projects go there, their stocks are amazing!

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Artwork, Characters and Story © by WindSwirl, me!
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This is a very nice cover! Your shading is done really well and your anatomy and folds are correct! Plus the composition looks wonderful. However, this piece lacks impact.

The reason why I say this is because despite the fact that character's position and surroundings are amazing, the title becomes distracting because it is covering part of your characters pretty little face. When drawing the cover for a manga, you must always make your character(s) the main focus in order to draw in an audience. I would say to either move the title up a little more or get rid if the black part of it and just have the words visible with the picture in the background.

Of course, these are just my personal opinions. All in all I can tell you worked really hard on this :) Good luck with the manga!
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CutieStar36 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I read the manga, and I loved it! Great job! Heart 
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WindSwirl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
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CutieStar36 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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DepthsOfDestruction Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ich sag ja, du kriegst das super hin!
Ich steh ja ganz speziell auf die Hände x3 Die krieg ich nie hin D:
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WindSwirl Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Dankeee :hug:
Oh ja, Hände sind schwierig. Meistens benutz ich meine eigenen als Vorlage xD
Was ich aber weitaus grausamer finde sind Füße. Vor allem mit Schuhen dran. DAS geht gar nicht <.<
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